Friday, March 26, 2010

Speaking Out - An acrostic

She looked at me
Perhaps to say something.
Eyes, hope within them?
Aspirations aplenty, lay crushed
Killed, dead, lost, shattered.
I wonder and shudder,
Now what to do?
Give her some space
Or return her faith?
Under the covers, hide?
Take the leap, instead!

Written for Acrostic Only

6 comments:

shwe said...

thnk god...i would hve been dam angry if u hadnt posted it... :)

welcome back to acros...and i hope u r bck for good...

i liked this one :D :)

cosmobong said...

Rashi the Genius gal thanks for helping me understand the art of Speaking out - the acrostic way... It took me some honest attempt to figure out the connection...

way to go gal... :)

Leo said...

i never knew u wrote it also, usually u show me.
if u hadnt posted this, i'd have been angry too.
its really a slam bang return to AO and dont stop.
its like u r back home :)

well and strongly worded acrostic.

Amity said...

Wow...this is a unique take on speaking out...:)

I am fellow AO writer, and this is my first time in your place, I find ur blog very good and interesting...:)

Have a nice weekend!

Scribbling Girl said...

wow this was so different!
i so missed ur acrostics
now u better be back
so i get to read such beautiful works :)

Amias said...

Coming out or speaking out .. it's all the same, you came back with a bang! Glad to find you again!