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i applaud u Raash, for u took a road less traveled. u went to the first person view.. and reading and visualizing, this scathed me. the effect was complete. kudos.
you've well presented it as the helpless prey, bravo!it's just a very painful scenario for an innocent child, and you hit it right!why it's only now that I've met you here at AO?
Very Good take, refreshingly different, on the prompt. Well done.
I stand in front of u, bow down n give u an applaud... the first person approach... the sketch of pain... and these lines "Begin, when did it?Unending, it seemed now!"U r superb... kp up!!
dam u rash...it pinched so bad... so bloody bad...
I got busy and see what i missed :(This was a pure brilliance girl :) Glad i m back in the blog hopping and writing to read masterpieces :)Loved it :)
Awesome :)Missed your writings as i was hardly blogging Glad i didnt miss this oneU trapped the point ....something which noone really wanna feel!Great work
Very touched indeed!
Thanks a lot!
Thank you. Thank you!
Thanks :)But now that you are here, hope to see you often :)
I am sorry?
Thanks, Amias :)
Thanks, SG :P
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