Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Lucky 13 Part 1.


Disclaimer : This has been written my brother, Akash. If you like this work more than mine and you tell him so, he might consider making a blog of his own. Till then, he shall leech off my space.



“Believe me, I had nothing to do with it.”, he shouted out. The bright lights make his pupils dilate, and still, the lights pierce his eyes. Moving his head up for a breath of fresh air, he can’t help but wonder whether “karma” had done him in. His lungs cannot take another dip into the icy cold water, but the San Francisco Police Department officials wanted answers. 34-year old, business tycoon, Roy Jefferson has had many visits to the SFPD office – on charges of fraud, extortion and even solicitation, but always managed to hide behind the best legal team money could buy. The large abundance of green paper in his back pocket had made him quite a few friends in the Police Department itself, but this was one deal, neither his money nor his shrewd business mind could get him out of. Found over his wife’s body, with her blond locks and blood all over his hands, he was caught red-handed. An anonymous 911 call had cost him dear. His lawyers tried their best to get their employer out of the mess he had gotten himself in, and in reality, it was extremely easy for the ‘Cutting-Edge Realty’ owner to entice the district police force with a not-so-hefty depression in his bank account, but with the global media fixated to their TV screens and gunning for Allison Jefferson’s killer, the police couldn’t afford any bribery allegations.

27-year retired veteran in the force, mother of two and regarded as the best female law enforcement officer in the country, Melinda Thomas had managed to reach her bed, after pretty much not knowing what sleep was for the three decades that went by, and as soon as she shut her eyes, her phone started ringing. “Sweet Home Alabama” was an appropriate ring-tone for Thomas as she was born, brought up and even served the force in her home state, before an obsession with a serial killer earned her a transfer twelve years ago to Illinois, from where she retired last year. This obsession had ruined her marriage, her social life, almost her career and, definitely, her life. Her daughters had no time to call an absentee mother – an absentee even when living in the same house, her mother had passed away without having her only daughter read her eulogy because she was busy running down a wild goose hunt and her ex-husband who found himself alone on all his vacation, her police years had been difficult for everyone around Melinda. With no friends and a dreadfully distant family, she spent her, now free, Saturday nights and Sunday Mornings watching Alfred Hitchcock classics or getting her old case files out of the closet and attempting to catch the one-man who got away. So, when Roy Jefferson was found over his wife’s lifeless body, the SFPD knew who to call, because of her reputation around the law enforcement circles - The woman who had dedicated her life to finding this man, and failed. Thomas had been in this same position the last time four bodies had been found in her state of Alabama, same M.O., in the span of two weeks
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Alistair Lee – 40-year old, Male, Caucasian, investment banker. Amanda Johnson – 22-year old, Female, African-American, waitress. Andrew Peterson – 8-year old, Male, Caucasian. Anna Petrov – 32-year old, Female, Russian Immigrant, Housewife. Different ages, different social circles, different ethnicities and all of them had no enemies. Then, what got all of them killed? They all couldn’t have been in the wrong place, at the wrong time & killed using the same M.O., all in a matter of ‘thirteen’ days. The figure of 13 days can easily be mistaken for 2 weeks, but not when it comes to this serial-killer. The police departments across the country have a compartment in their file cabinet dedicated to who the media termed as the ‘Lucky 13 killer’.

10 comments:

ladynimue said...

Ok so I love this place for the poetry ,, but this is cool !! get off here and make a new blog for yourself dude !! :D

I loved this .. waiting to read more soon !!

PS : 27-year retired veteran in the force = 27 years of service right ? i did not get this in first read till i finished the para .. rest was perfect !

Akash said...

Yes, that is what it meant. It made complete sense in my head, but now that you pointed it out, it does cause confusion.
Thanks for the read and the comment. Hopefully, a few more comments like yours will be motivation enough to find my own place and move out of my "older" sister's shadow.

Sharika said...

please move out of your sister s blog.. i loved reading it.. the thrill is def there.. flow is excellent.. am waiting for more.. and rashi, pls put up u r bro s blog id, coz i wud like to follow that too :)

Vetti said...

Why doesn't this boy have his own blog again?

Akash said...

I will move out soon. It's just my first write-up ever! Didn't know how well-received it would be, but 3 comments in an hour is more than I could've hoped for. I'm licking my lips at the prospect of becoming more successful than (actually, decimating) my sister's blog.
Thanks for the comments, btw.

Anonymous said...

Well written and does build interest.YES you should start your own blog for sure !

Scribbling Gal said...
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Scribbling Gal said...

Woah.....how brilliantly u write and yet you don't have a blog..UNFAIR

The built up....the thrill...everything was perfect...u know how to hook up anyone....

So get ur space and get writing big time!

Baidik said...

It had me hooked Akash. Enough to book mark it and wait for Part 2. QUICK!

Snehalatha Naidu said...

Very good work Akash. Keep writing. All the best.