Loneliness- you never left my side,
From me you never did hide.
Whether did surge or ebb the tide,
By me you always lied.
Whether alone or not,
Your presence has never been in doubt.
Whether spring or fall,
You have been with me through it all.
Whether a smile or frown,
You have been always around.
Whether life was up or down,
You never did me renoun,
True, whatever turns did life take,
You are a friend unfake.
Then how am I alone, how am I lonely?
Written on Tuesday, October 11, 2005. (I was 17 then)
Posted for OSI
11 comments:
very nicely written, Expressive !!
mam.. blogs are fine... but its time to change the theme....
So well written...Loved it so much...
I have also written a poem like this before...though I have used "Sorrow" as my friend...
Great! You made loneliness your friend! Now how can you ever be lonely??
I love this piece. A great piece.
So true RV...
Indeed, loneliness is just around the corner, seem never to leave us, just pops in when it wants to!
beautifully written! liked it so much!
nice rhyme scheme ... i think for many of us there is an element of loneliness that will always be there ... and, maybe that's not such a bad thing.
Loneliness can be a constant companion at times...I really enjoyed your poem and it's unique perspective.
I like the rhyming!
dad, farther and farther away
I liked it.. I think one of my haikus talk about friendship with loneliness.. hope you will have a look at it..
I just wrote a poem on loneliness and then i read it....gosh....will comment more when in sane mood......and visit me once a while girl :P
I just wrote a poem on loneliness and then i read it....gosh....will comment more when in sane mood......and visit me once a while girl :P
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