Tuesday, December 22, 2009

I lost myself

This place I used to

Once call mine.

This life, I used to

Once call mine.



What belonged to me,

Doesnt anymore!

Places and things

Infested with memories,

Memories of you, of us.

Of times spent in

Arms of you.



Everywhere I go,

I lose myself

In a time, when

you were here.

I lose myself

In a place, when

we were one.



This place I used to

Once call mine.

This life, I used to

Once call mine.



Vanity is the price,

I paid for love.

A price I regret not.

I'm me, no longer.

What was mine,

is mine, no longer.



I lost myself

when I found you.

8 comments:

Leo said...

kudos to you babe... its wonderful... powerful, sad yet romantic in a sense. i admire this, adore this in words i cant say... its beautiful to the infinteth level. i'd only change "arms of you" to "arms of yours"... but even without that, i think its lovely.

krist0ph3r said...

that so reminds me of my own life right now! i'm listening to one of my fav albums from 3 years ago...and it makes me miss my ex so much, even though we parted for good reasons!

but btw one thing i've noticed, is that life keeps opening up new avenues, new places to explore, new feelings you've never felt before. it's not so much the same road, but more like one that crisscrosses the old one once in a while :)

aparna said...

well written...

i feel lost sometimes in the most familiar places...all those strange faces and unkwown places...i knw tht feeling

Maverick said...

wonderfully done! simple in feel yet beautifully conveyed emotions! trademark Rashi!
:)

<3 it!

Maverick said...

wonderfully done! simple in its form yet beautifully conveyed emotions! trademark Rashi! <3 it! :)

Dev said...

I lost myself. When I found you.
These are such potent lines...that they force you into realizing the effects of loving someone.
Awesome stuff.

Ananya said...

To be so much in love is kinda scary..it may hurt...have experienced the pangs of love when I had 2 visit the places and look at my surroundings without the one I love with me!
Everything around me reminds me of him...but nothing around me has him!

psychedchick said...

I hate that feeling. I have decided never to meet my love in my city. I can't bear to do the same things without him!