Sunday, November 14, 2010


It echoes throughout the skies,
It echoes in the streets,
It echoes in deep hollows
of the bleeding heart.

Vacuum fills up,
where once you resided.
Void remains,
where once you belonged.

It echoes to remind of the hollow
that I have become.
It echoes to remind of the love
that I lost.

It shall echo until one day,
when it will hurt no more.
The bruises will heal and
it will echo no more.



Scribbling Girl said...

Sigh the pain could be read in every word.....sigh to life.

Vivek Nanda said...

Very nicely expressed, heart felt !!

AbhiLaSH RuHeLa said...

I hope my comment will echo too..



See, it echoed... ;-)

Anonymous said...

Loved this :) so true !!
And i liked the books in your blog template :)

The Write Girl said...

Lovely poem...the heart echoes until it heals. Nicely written. I liked your profile section and pic as well. Nice blog!

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Lucky for us echoes do fade.

Jingle Poetry said...

vivid and powerful echoes.
love your imaginations.

Amity said...

Ouchhhhh...but brave girl you are!

Til all are numb...then no more echoes to hear...:-) I don't think so...coz the more it will haunt us...:-)

WEll penned RV... :-)

SoNaM said...

very nice :) bful thought.