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Tuesday, October 13, 2009

The half

We met but for a brief time.
We parted with sorrow sweet.
Promises of once again
Deep within us.

Far away you are.
Close to my heart,
there is, though,
A small piece of you

A half of what you carry,
A half of what you touch
Each day like you
Touched me once.

I hold it close to myself
Trying to relive each moment
Hoping that some day
I will hold you just as close.

That bit of you protects
and cares for me.
Supports me when
I'm down. It is you.

It is what I cling to
When Im scared.
It is what I clench
When I'm afraid. It is you.

One day, finally,
We will be together again
The halves around the necks
Will be one just like us.


Written for OSI
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19 comments:

  1. shwetaOctober 13, 2009 at 8:26 PM

    woah rash...gr8...

    i hope so too...that one day you ll be one..

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  2. LeoOctober 13, 2009 at 11:38 PM

    beautiful Raash.. so nicely written! gr8!! :)

    i second Tweety ji in her second part of comment!! :)

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  3. AnuragOctober 14, 2009 at 3:01 AM

    Awesome post :)...nicely expressed

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  4. RashiOctober 14, 2009 at 6:43 AM

    Amazing Rashi... beautifully written!!!! u r so so good!!!

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  5. MaverickOctober 14, 2009 at 7:07 PM

    I already told u....Its wonderful....beautiful with a deep penetrative feel dat touches da soul......getting back to old ways are we! dis is one comeback dat feels so very good! :)

    tc! keep up da awesome work!

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  6. PratsOctober 15, 2009 at 5:50 AM

    beautiful :)

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  7. pattiOctober 15, 2009 at 10:58 AM

    beautifully written~

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  8. psychedchickOctober 16, 2009 at 8:01 AM

    What do I say as a reply to this comment now?

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  9. psychedchickOctober 16, 2009 at 8:03 AM

    :D What can I say except thanks a lot :D

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  10. psychedchickOctober 16, 2009 at 8:03 AM

    Thanks Leo :D As always, thanks :D

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  11. psychedchickOctober 16, 2009 at 8:04 AM

    Wow.... Thanks...Me blushing :D

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  12. psychedchickOctober 16, 2009 at 8:06 AM

    One word that sums it up ? :P Thanks!

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  13. psychedchickOctober 16, 2009 at 8:06 AM

    Comeback I dont know but yeah, I feel welcomed for sure :D

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  14. psychedchickOctober 16, 2009 at 8:07 AM

    Thanks for stopping by!

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  15. NabilaOctober 16, 2009 at 8:09 AM

    Well i told u many times...sighs and bigger sighes!
    Wishes of a whole and not half a heart!
    I wish it for u as i wish for all!
    Amazing :)

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  16. SandyCarlsonOctober 16, 2009 at 8:32 PM

    A wonderful contribution to OSI this week. Thanks.

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  17. KushalOctober 20, 2009 at 7:06 AM

    I wish we could have you publish these sometime. As a big huge journal.

    Amazing sales I forecast \m/ \m/

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  18. RohanOctober 25, 2009 at 7:46 PM

    So true,
    So beautifully said.
    Right from the heart

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  19. RohanOctober 26, 2009 at 1:19 AM

    Yes, one day we shall be together again,
    One day we shall go for a movie again,
    One day u shall throw a party at tungas again,
    yes i ll take care of u too,
    take care that u dont bang the car door,

    Cheers

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