tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post2252971856792959678..comments2023-10-14T17:04:58.966+05:30Comments on Rocky Road.: FoolRVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07795787884637157672noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-564608462310724832010-04-11T22:04:36.210+05:302010-04-11T22:04:36.210+05:30Lovely poem. Nice and sweet and so true.
A small ...Lovely poem. Nice and sweet and so true.<br /><br />A small feedback though - I felt that the refrain was too much for the size of the poem. Also I felt third stanza pattern did not go with pattern of first two - where you talk about your optimistic view and how you are not perturbed by world's opinion of your foolish optimism but in third there is nothing about your optimism.<br /><br />Was out of town. So posting comment after BATON contest. My entry for contest was a poem too. Do check it out as and when you have time.<br /><br /><a href="javascript:void(0);" rel="nofollow">The Fool - FOOL</a>T F Carthickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417105427125776020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-6632790767478315122010-04-09T15:46:57.539+05:302010-04-09T15:46:57.539+05:30Superb take on the topic, Rashi! Loved the simple,...Superb take on the topic, Rashi! Loved the simple, yet profound poem...<br /><br />Great going. All the Best for BATOM!Parth J Davehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02383753736558917943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-36974317335251697382010-04-07T00:59:03.341+05:302010-04-07T00:59:03.341+05:30Yo.. Proud to be fool :)
Interesting take Rashi n...Yo.. Proud to be fool :)<br /><br />Interesting take Rashi nd well poetry seems the theme this time.. thrd post um reading, nd this is the third poem :)<br /><br />Blog-a-Tonically Yours<br /><a href="http://vipulgrover.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Vipul Grover</a>Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-64240419697195406932010-04-05T18:15:16.872+05:302010-04-05T18:15:16.872+05:30Beautiful take of the prompt :)
Keep up the good w...Beautiful take of the prompt :)<br />Keep up the good work :D<br /><br />Cheers!!Chatterboxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10515351283232359854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-48599933616690660652010-04-05T17:40:36.498+05:302010-04-05T17:40:36.498+05:30With my heart on my sleeve
and head on my shoulder...<i> With my heart on my sleeve<br />and head on my shoulders,<br />I proclaim, myself to be,<br />Just another fool!<br /></i><br /><br />Loved it!!R!https://www.blogger.com/profile/05773553477547886684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-37537824161055207842010-04-05T16:41:14.376+05:302010-04-05T16:41:14.376+05:30a very nice poem..
the last stanza was an absolute...a very nice poem..<br />the last stanza was an absolutely beautyTuppencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16655946887696755187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-15170769521599689172010-04-05T12:42:09.522+05:302010-04-05T12:42:09.522+05:30Sounding rADIANT!
Keep it up.Sounding rADIANT!<br /><br />Keep it up.Makkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14012915183456139011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-83508616302745121972010-04-04T21:42:28.994+05:302010-04-04T21:42:28.994+05:30Being oneself is paramount... being fool is relati...Being oneself is paramount... being fool is relative! Your post made me think a lot! Simply superb!Neeraj Shindehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17319205659475486728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-18584758111083121262010-04-04T17:45:23.842+05:302010-04-04T17:45:23.842+05:30@ Rashi
Am just like your poem..so enjoyed being ...<b>@ Rashi</b><br /><br /><i>Am just like your poem..so enjoyed being a fool and perhaps the delights of life:)<br /><br />Quite a nice poem!<br />Liked it!</i><br /><br />~ <b>Keep the Spark ALive..</b>Rachana Shakyawarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08763132947288456210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-80111785204687150332010-04-04T17:32:14.748+05:302010-04-04T17:32:14.748+05:30wow i cd i miss reading this .
Made me remember &#...wow i cd i miss reading this .<br />Made me remember ' i am a fool in love with the fool ' <br />And i love being the fool :)<br />Lovely poemLady Whispershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15051384418188753857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-53057828424895436722010-04-04T15:19:13.367+05:302010-04-04T15:19:13.367+05:30Beautiful verse!!! Keep it up. Best of luck for BA...Beautiful verse!!! Keep it up. Best of luck for BATOMARJunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521569264034779626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-57083895131002012752010-04-04T14:49:59.845+05:302010-04-04T14:49:59.845+05:30Nicely said......good one
Here is my BAT post::Mu...Nicely said......good one<br /><br />Here is my BAT post::<a href="http://moosicalbovine.blogspot.com/2010/04/fool.html#comments" rel="nofollow">Murali - FOOL</a>Mural!https://www.blogger.com/profile/11643191331885148010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-22906671550367740922010-04-04T10:31:31.766+05:302010-04-04T10:31:31.766+05:30nice one :)nice one :)Mahesh Aadhya Kalalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08671369216676666618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-68085381041456031872010-04-04T09:22:18.335+05:302010-04-04T09:22:18.335+05:30yeah...the last para was awesome, to say the least...yeah...the last para was awesome, to say the least!swayambhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12938360138036209410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-10793403662753161612010-04-04T00:45:29.325+05:302010-04-04T00:45:29.325+05:30Hmm... The last para did the magic.... As said bef...Hmm... The last para did the magic.... As said before, saying again.. wonder-fool and beauti-fool ;)<br /><br />keep it up..Saurangshu Kanunjnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17810542602167849728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-3231311456787908472010-04-03T23:37:28.432+05:302010-04-03T23:37:28.432+05:30Choose to be urself always! What a poem... loved i...Choose to be urself always! What a poem... loved it... All the best for BAT Rashi!Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com)https://www.blogger.com/profile/17839310637450577558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-36758737907385189532010-04-03T15:31:47.571+05:302010-04-03T15:31:47.571+05:30good post! all the best :)good post! all the best :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02851514258259153850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-64707169975385734302010-04-03T14:36:13.028+05:302010-04-03T14:36:13.028+05:30Just another fool here too! :D
Good work! :) I li...Just another fool here too! :D<br /><br />Good work! :) I liked this...Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-22538195957492713862010-04-03T12:21:58.424+05:302010-04-03T12:21:58.424+05:30Hmm.. I liked it .. 'To choose oneself as one ...Hmm.. I liked it .. 'To choose oneself as one is'in reality is act of wisdom and not foolishness..aativashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637505515780080897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8818941414705345410.post-60275210503540060182010-04-03T09:49:09.563+05:302010-04-03T09:49:09.563+05:30I must say that to the wise, life is a problem; to...I must say that to the wise, life is a problem; to the fool, a solution. ;-)<br /><br />Well written, Rashi!<br /><br />PS: Better a witty fool than a foolish wit.Er.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11225359974373760374noreply@blogger.com